Class Activity # 4

Sample1 cover letter
The strengths of this cover letter are that they have their contact information and the address of whom the letter is being sent to. They elaborate well with their description of what they have learned at school, but a little repetitive in saying almost the same thing. They do give their contact information at the end of their letter.

The weaknesses of this sample cover letter is that he ask to be considered for the job in a question instead of insisting that they meet, his first paragraph is poor grammatically, there is also more grammar errors in the following paragraphs.


Sample 2 cover letter
The strengths of this cover letter are that they have their contact information and the address of whom the letter is being sent to. They out that they would like to be considered buy not asking a question. This shows confidence. here is also a good amount of elaboration on what she has learned and why she would be qualified for the job position.

The weaknesses of this sample cover letter are that I did not really find any. I thought the job letter was a good one.

(I thought this was a really good job letter)


Sample 3 cover letter
The strengths of this cover letter are they did a really good job at elaborating what they learned on the job experience and their education. They also included their enclosure so the reader knows that there is another portion to the document.

The weaknesses of this sample cover letter are that the date is at the top left of the letter and that draws away from the flow of the letter. They should have split up their education information and work experience into two paragraphs.


Sample 4 cover letter

The strengths of this cover letter are that they had a nice introductory paragraph and it was to the point. The following paragraphs on their education and job experience seem very well qualified and did a great job at explaining what was learned and experienced from working.

The weaknesses of this sample cover letter are that they did not put the sate on the letter, need to move their apt number up a line.