Thursday, April 10, 2008

Class Acyivity 20

• What is the identified problem that the sample proposal deals with?

The problem is the number of cyclist head injuries in the state and the solutions to lower the number of injuries.

• What kind of research methods does the writer use to collect the data in order to describe the problem?

The research method the writer uses to collect the data to describe the problem is statistical data records from recent injuries, medical records, and interviewing those in cycling organizations the cyclers who have suffered from head injuries.

• Are you convinced as a reader that there does exist a problem about the bicycle head injuries?

Yes, I am convinced as a reader that there is a problem among cyclists injuries through the various examples of injuries that have occurred.

• Please describe in detail HOW the writer has successfully persuaded you about the existence of the problem.

How in detail the writer has successfully persuaded me about the existence of the problem. He mentions that he has been researching this problem for over six years and that he himself is also a bicyclist.

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